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Sent: Wednesday, October 08, 2003 10:28
AM
Subject: Re: Re: MIB Doctor
review:draft-ietf-mpls-telink-mib-03.txt
Hi,
The Bandwidth units are in "thousand bps" and
syntax is Unsigned32. With this we will be able to support only around 4000
Gigabit.
But for optical links, the bandwidth might be
greater than this.
Should we revisit
this?
Regards,
Anu
On Wed, 03 Sep 2003 Martin Dubuc wrote
:
>I will submit shortly a MIB that addresses your comments as version
04.
>Embedded is my
>response to your original message. I need
some feedback from you on the
last
>points.
>
>Martin
>
>----- Original
Message -----
> From: "Wijnen, Bert (Bert)"
<bwijnen@lucent.com>
>To: "'Martin Dubuc'"
<dubuc.consulting@rogers.com>; "Mpls
(E-mail)"
><mpls@uu.net>
>Sent: Monday, September 01, 2003
2:43 PM
>Subject: MIB Doctor
review:draft-ietf-mpls-telink-mib-03.txt
>
>
> > -
Interesting that title page claims that doc expires feb 2003?
>
> You porobably mean feb 2004
>
>
>
>Yes.
>
> > - I get this WMICng
warning:
> > W: f(telink.mi2), (1564,19) MIN-ACCESS value
identical to access
> > specified for
"teLinkBandwidthUnreserved"
> > Seems to me you can just remove
that MIN-ACCESS from the MODULE
> > COMPLIANCE.
>
>
>
>Done.
>
> > - I see
> >
TeLinkSonetSdhIndication ::= TEXTUAL-CONVENTION
> >
STATUS current
> >
DESCRIPTION
> > "SONET/SDH
indication type."
> > SYNTAX
INTEGER {
> >
standard(0),
> >
arbitrary(1)
> >
}
> > Since we
normallyh do not start with zero (but with 1), I assume
> >
there is a reason you start with zero. Could that reason be
described
> > and is there a doc that explains this, so
that you refernece it?
> >
>
>Use of zero is done to map
to the message definition of the interface
>switching capability
specific information field as specified in
>[GMPLS-OSPF]. I have
explained this in the description and added reference
>to the document
that specifies the message format.
>
> > NITS:
>
>
> > - I see
> > teLinkGroups
>
> OBJECT IDENTIFIER ::= { teLinkConformance 1
}
> >
> > teLinkCompliances
> >
OBJECT IDENTIFIER ::= { teLinkConformance 2 }
>
> Normally we do it the other way around, first Compliances, then
Groups,
> > See page 35, appendix D of
draft-ietf-ops-mib-review-guidelines-02.txt
>
>
>
>Done.
>
> > - I see in OBJECT-GROUP
statement things like:
> > DESCRIPTION
>
> "Collection of objects needed for the
monitoring of
> > resources
associated with TE links."
> > I would think the objects *at
least a subset) are also usefull for
> > configuration. How
about:
> > DESCRIPTION
> >
"Collection of objects for management of
>
> resources associated with TE
links."
> > Most OBJECT-GROUP descritpion clauses have similar
"problem".
> >
>
>I have updated the description of the
groups that used the word monitoring
>in the
description.
>
> > - I see:
> >
teLinkModuleFullCompliance MODULE-COMPLIANCE
> >
STATUS current
> > DESCRIPTION
> >
"Compliance statement for agents that support the
>
> configuration and monitoring of TE Link MIB
module."
> > Mmmm. I would word it a bit
different:
> > "Compliance statement for
agents that support read-create
> > so
that both configuration and monitoring of TE Links can
> >
be accomplished via this MIB module."
> >
Matter of taste I guess.
> >
>
>Have updated text
accordingly.
>
> > - I see:
> >
teLinkModuleReadOnlyCompliance MODULE-COMPLIANCE
> >
STATUS current
> > DESCRIPTION
>
> "Compliance statement for agents that support
the
> > monitoring of TE link MIB
module."
> > MODULE -- this module
>
>
> > -- The mandatory groups have to be
implemented
> > -- by all devices supporting TE
links. However, they may all
> > -- be supported
as read-only objects in the case where manual
> >
-- configuration is unsupported.
> >
> >
MANDATORY-GROUPS { teLinkGroup,
> >
teLinkBandwidthGroup,
> >
componentLinkBandwidthGroup }
> >
> > It seems
to me that that all of those 4 comment lines are redundant.
> >
The idea of the MODULE-COMPLIANCE statements is that they are
both
> > human and machine readable.
>
>
>
>I am not sure I understand why the fact that the
MODULE-COMPLIANCE
>statements are human and machine readable makes these
comments redundant.
>
> > - I see hyphenation. That is
something the RFC-Editor does not want/like.
>
>
>
>Hyphenation is done automatically with nroff. I don't know
how to turn it
>off.
>Any idea?
>
> > - Section 6
starts with:
> > 6. Brief Description of MIB
Objects
> >
> > Sections 6.1-6.4
describe objects pertaining to TE links. The MIB
> >
objects were derived from the link bundling document
[BUNDLING].
> > How abaout the section 6.5-6.7 ??
>
>
>
>I have clarified this in the text.
>
> >
Thanks,
> > Bert
>