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["Adrian Farrel" <afarrel@movaz.com>]

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----- Original Message -----
From: "Adrian Farrel" <afarrel@movaz.com>
To: "Thomas D. Nadeau" <tnadeau@cisco.com>
Cc: <mmorrow@cisco.com>; "George Swallow" <swallow@cisco.com>;
<dallan@nortelnetworks.com>
Sent: Monday, March 17, 2003 7:13 PM
Subject: draft-nadeau-ietf-oam-requirements-01.txt


> Hi Tom,
>
> Can you add a requirement in 3.1 that detection mechanisms must not have an
> "undue" impact on traffic (that is traffic when there is no error and traffic
on
> other LSPs)
>
> Typos...
> section 3
> "relationships between providers has" read "have"
>
> section 3.1
> "specified both w.r.t. with regard to" strike "w.r.t."
>
> section 3.2
> "specify recovery actions in an" add "for" to read "specify recovery actions
for
> in an"
>
> section 3.5
> "the generation of superfluous generation of"
> Self-defining text :-)
>
> sections 3.8 and 3.9 are not sections
>
> Cheers,
> Adrian
>
>