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FW: Editorial comment on draft-ietf-mpls-mgmt-overview-03.txt

  • From: "Lam, Hing-Kam (Kam)" <hklam@lucent.com>
  • Date: Wed, 2 Apr 2003 00:30:57 -0500
  • Cc: "'swallow@cisco.com'" <swallow@cisco.com>

Hi,

Attached is an editorial comment that has been sent recently to the authors.

Regards,
Kam

-----Original Message-----
From: Adrian Farrel [mailto:afarrel@movaz.com]
Sent: Friday, March 28, 2003 10:53 AM
To: Lam, Hing-Kam (Kam); cheenu@paramanet.com; Thomas D. Nadeau
Subject: Re: Editorial comment on draft-ietf-mpls-mgmt-overview-03.txt


Quite right.
Thanks for reading.
Adrian
----- Original Message -----
From: "Thomas D. Nadeau" <tnadeau@cisco.com>
To: "Lam, Hing-Kam (Kam)" <hklam@lucent.com>; <cheenu@paramanet.com>;
<afarrel@movaz.com>
Sent: Friday, March 28, 2003 10:13 AM
Subject: Re: Editorial comment on draft-ietf-mpls-mgmt-overview-03.txt


>
>          Will do.
>
>          --tom
>
> >As Version 03 of the Overview document now explicitly introduces the
> >MPLS-LDP-GENERIC-MIB, MPLS-LDP-ATM-MIB, and MPLS-LDP-FRAME-RELAY-MIB
> >modules in sections 4.5, 4.6, and 4.7 respectively, it will be helpful to
> >have a sentence in these sections to state that the modules are defined in
> >the [LDPMIB] document, e.g., a sentence like
> >"This MIB module is defined in MPLS LDP MIB [LDPMIB]."
> >
> >Regards,
> >Kam
>
>
> http://www.elsevier-international.com/catalogue/title.cfm?ISBN=155860751X
>
>