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Hi,
Thanks for the comments. We will incorporate and re-post.
--Tom
>A few comments:
>
>- TOC is that of the LSR MIB!
>
>- Abstract - how about:
>
> This memo defines MIB modules to realize label switching controlled
> Frame Relay and ATM interfaces given the interface stacking defined
> in MPLS-LSR-MIB and MPLS-TE-MIB.
>
>- Section 6 starts of talking about LC-ATM interfaces and then starts
> referring to both ATM and FR interfaces. You should probably have
> seperate sections for the two or rename the section and describe
> the two in seperate paras.
>
>- Update the date(s) in the MODULE-IDENTITY.
>
>- In the description of the tables you say that entries in the table
> are created by the LSR (automatically, as opposed to creation by the
> operator). Then, why do you need the RowStatus object? The LSR presumably
> creates the entry indicating whatever default capability and (optionally)
> allows the operator to change ranges etc. Am I missing something?
>
>- Sec. 12 - you say: "This module does not define any management objects.
>Instead, it
> defines two new ifTypes which may be used by other MPLS MIB
> modules to define management objects."
>
> Rewrite this as this doc contains two modules which definitely define
> management objects! Since these are writeable you will have some
> security considerations - section 11 of the LSR would be a decent
> template. Also I didn't see any new ifType defined - you
> have instead added augments to the interface conf table.
>
>Hope this helps.
>
>Cheenu
>
> > -----Original Message-----
> > From: Thomas D. Nadeau [mailto:tnadeau@cisco.com]
> > Sent: Monday, June 24, 2002 4:03 PM
> > Subject: draft-nadeau-mpls-lc-if-mib-00.txt
> >
> >
> >
> > FYI, the new draft draft-nadeau-mpls-lc-if-mib-00.txt
> > has been published in the I-D repository. I would appreciate
> > it if you could give it a look-see when you had a chance.
> >
> > --Tom
> >
> >
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> > ----------
> > Mathematics is the supreme nostalgia of our time.
> >
> >
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