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Hi Paul,
Thanks for the comments. We will get to looking at them shortly
and will reply to them then.
Regards,
--Tom
>Hi Tom. Here are a few comments on the draft-ietf-mpls-te-mib-04.txt.
>
>Content:
>
>o Page 26: The description for the mplsTunnelResourceMaxRate object states
>that "0
>indicates best-effort treatment." This violates the syntax of MplsBitRate.
>MplsBitRate is defined in the LSR MIB and it has a "SYNTAX Integer32
>(1..2147483647)". The simple solution would be to change the range to
>include "0"
>but the LSR MIB gone to last call. (Heavy sigh.)
>
>o Should some text be added to indicate that the "mplsTunnelIndex" should
>be used
>as the Tunnel ID?
>
>Editorial:
>
>o Section 6.2: The last sentence in this section is "Tunnel that do not share
>resource...this table." "Tunnel" should be "Tunnels".
>
>o Page 21: The description for mplsTunnelHopTable has the following
>sentence: "Each
>row in this table is indexed primarily by the same index, mplsTunnelIndex,
>as the
>row of the corresponding tunnel in mplsTunnelTable." The index to this
>table has
>changed so this statement is no longer true.
>
>o Page 24: In the description for mplsTunnelHopLspId, (in the second sentence)
>"tuunel" should be replaced with "tunnel"
>
>o Many pages. The references to <draft-ietf-mpls-lsr-mib-04.txt> need to be
>updated.
>
>o Starting at Page 26: The objects: mplsTunnelResourceMaxRate,
>mplsTunnelResourceMeanRate, and mplsTunnelResourceMaxBurstSize all need to
>have
>their descriptions updated to reflect the name changes of the LSR MIB. One
>example
>is the sentence "This object is copied to an instance of mplsTSpecMaxRate in
>mplsTSpecTable the index of which is copied into the corresponding
>mplsInSegmentTSpecIndex." In this sentence "mplsTSpecMaxRate" should be
>changed to
>"mplsTrafficParamMaxRate" etc. (I believe these names were changed in the
>LSR MIB
>when going from version 02 to 03.)
>
>--
>Paul Langille e-mail: langille@crescentnetworks.com
>Crescent Networks phone: (978) 244-9002 x244
>201 Riverneck Road fax: (978) 244-9211
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