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Hi Tom. Here are a few comments on the draft-ietf-mpls-te-mib-04.txt. Content: o Page 26: The description for the mplsTunnelResourceMaxRate object states that "0 indicates best-effort treatment." This violates the syntax of MplsBitRate. MplsBitRate is defined in the LSR MIB and it has a "SYNTAX Integer32 (1..2147483647)". The simple solution would be to change the range to include "0" but the LSR MIB gone to last call. (Heavy sigh.) o Should some text be added to indicate that the "mplsTunnelIndex" should be used as the Tunnel ID? Editorial: o Section 6.2: The last sentence in this section is "Tunnel that do not share resource...this table." "Tunnel" should be "Tunnels". o Page 21: The description for mplsTunnelHopTable has the following sentence: "Each row in this table is indexed primarily by the same index, mplsTunnelIndex, as the row of the corresponding tunnel in mplsTunnelTable." The index to this table has changed so this statement is no longer true. o Page 24: In the description for mplsTunnelHopLspId, (in the second sentence) "tuunel" should be replaced with "tunnel" o Many pages. The references to <draft-ietf-mpls-lsr-mib-04.txt> need to be updated. o Starting at Page 26: The objects: mplsTunnelResourceMaxRate, mplsTunnelResourceMeanRate, and mplsTunnelResourceMaxBurstSize all need to have their descriptions updated to reflect the name changes of the LSR MIB. One example is the sentence "This object is copied to an instance of mplsTSpecMaxRate in mplsTSpecTable the index of which is copied into the corresponding mplsInSegmentTSpecIndex." In this sentence "mplsTSpecMaxRate" should be changed to "mplsTrafficParamMaxRate" etc. (I believe these names were changed in the LSR MIB when going from version 02 to 03.) -- Paul Langille e-mail: langille@crescentnetworks.com Crescent Networks phone: (978) 244-9002 x244 201 Riverneck Road fax: (978) 244-9211 Chelmsford, MA 01824
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