The MPLS WG Archive[Date Prev][Date Next][Thread Prev][Thread Next] [Date Index][Thread Index][Author Index][Subject Index] FW: I-D ACTION:draft-ietf-mpls-rsvp-tunnel-applicability-01.t xt
Dimitry, Thanks or the note. See additional comments inline... On Wed, Apr 19, 2000 at 10:52:03AM -0400, Dimitry Haskin wrote: > Dan, > > Let me suggest the following text: > > "To be definite, in the original RSVP protocol [3], a session > was defined as a data flow with a particular destination and > transport layer protocol. In the RSVP-TE specification, however, > session is defined as the set of label switched packets with > a particular destination, tunnel id, and extended tunnel id." This is a good try, but it conveys an incorrect impression that the parameters of the RSVP-TE SESSION object (tunnel end point address, tunnel id, and extended tunnel id) are in fact attributes of the label switched packets. That is, it confuses the semantics of the RSVP-TE signaling messages that instantiate a session with the attributes of the packets that comprise the session. Nonetheless, you did have a valid point in your original email, in that you discerned that the wording of the applicability draft did not express the fact that a session may result in more than one LSP. With this mind, here's a corrected version of the second sentence which accommodates your input. "In the RSVP-TE specification, however, a session is defined as the set of label switched packets that are instantiated by RSVP-TE messages containing particular values of the SESSION object parameters (Tunnel-End-Point-Address, Tunnel-Id, and Extended-Tunnel-Id)." Let's converge on these rhetorical aspects and move on to other issues... George/Lou feel free to step in if a more concise description is needed. Cheers, /Dan
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